I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Great job Kya for taking on your feedback and making your DLO more interesting. This is Year 8 quality work and looks really colourful and eyecatching. Make sure you put in this type of effort for each task that you do. It will challenge your learning and make what you are sharing with us stand out from the rest.
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Great job Kya for taking on your feedback and making your DLO more interesting. This is Year 8 quality work and looks really colourful and eyecatching. Make sure you put in this type of effort for each task that you do. It will challenge your learning and make what you are sharing with us stand out from the rest.
ReplyDeleteKa pai and good job!
- Miss Birtch