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   Zoo babies

Knowledge

Chimpanzees are going to go extinct.

People send baby animals around the world so they can breed.

Some people are chopping down the forest.  

people experiments on animals.

                     Comprehension

Some zoo babies are going to be extinct. Because people are chopping down the forest some animals like tigers chimpanzees and red pandas. Also people are using  them for testing so let’s take care of them.

                      Application

                    Analysis

                  Red panda

Red pandas are at  zoo because they are about to go extinct  because people are chopping down there forest so they are spreading them around the word so they can breed and they will stall be alive if we can breed them that’s why we put them in zoos.

this is about my learning in reading the story was called timber

so please comment and tall me what i can do.

Knowledge

List 5 facts

1: when pukekos show their white tails show that there is danger

2: pukekos are good runners

3: pukekos are good swimmers

4: pukekos are very good hiders

5: pukekos are like ducks

                Comprehension

This story is telling as about pukekos

Pukekos mostly like to run swim eat and hide from as did you know that pukekos have a white fathers to show all the other pukekos that there’s danger by when people go close by the pukekos they swim away or run away so when you go to see a pukeko be careful to hide where you can see.  

             Application

                            Analysis

How we can help pukekos from being in danger we can help them find a place where they can stay safe  or we can  put them in a safe place.

By kya tapara

                 Cookies

Jesse started to make the cookie dough. Then Joe started to roll the dough down. Next Emma was putting jam in the cookes . Later Jesse’ Joe and Emma ate the jam cookies.

Trees

Poem by Kya and Thomas

Trees are oxygen giving

Autumn leaves fall

From our beautiful nature

That's all around us

Keeping us alive

Giving us shelter

From the weather

With nature’s smell

Breathing in tree oxygen

Breathing in air

from the tree’s of life

Keeping us alive

Giving us fruit

Giving us vegetables

Oxygen too

Trees we love the most