My Character Passion Project 2018

Hi! i am just here to tell you about my character and what my character does. So my characters name is Valmia, she is a dancing girl she is also part of a group of girls called (as i said) the dancing girls There are five girls in total me Jazz and three other people i don't know the names of anyway my girl does not have that much description apart from she is a dancer all the dancing girls are friends with fizzy and blousey and apart from that, that's all my character is. The back story....
Valmia was a homeless person and so was her family but one day she saw a sign that said (Dancing Contest) It was at 7:00pm today and it was 6:49 so she had enough time. when she got up on stage she was dancing like a queen she soon found out that shes in the group and got given 20,000 dollars. And that's how she became a dancer

Science Show

Today on November the 28th on this day we went to a science show there were three people there, was Shane Anna and another guy.  We started off by sitting in a small hall there were three rooms that we could go in. at first we started by sitting and listing to a guy and girl talk we were shown demonstrations of hot and cold. After we finished we got to look around all the different experiments there was one that i did like you sit in a chair with a long fabric  surrounding you with black and white stripes spinning around and around. Me and my friend Lucy were looking around for things to do (keep in mind there were three rooms full of experiments.) here are some photos of the science show.

Thanks if you were reading this and I hope to do this again.

Living a Lie

How my story begins….

I was a normal girl…. Until i found out a secret my mother has been keeping away from me. i  was a demon in an angles school.

Time: 4:30 AM

Rachel (Abbys mother): ABBY WAKE UP NOW!

Abby: W-what Why???

Rachel: we have to go somewhere so GET UP NOW

Abby: Okay ill be down there soon

5 mins later

Abby: okay mom im here

Rachel: okay into the car now.

1 hour goes past they end up in a forest

Rachel: go outside and play.

Abby: okay

Abby runs off into the forest finding a wolf pup she comes back to were she last saw her mum but when she got there her mum was gone.

Abby: M-mum where are you….

Abby crawls into a ball and starts to fall asleep with the wolf pup.

The next day.

Abby: *wakes up* M-mum???

Abby: oh she’s not here…

Abby: why did mum leave what did i do??

Abby: *looks down at wolf pup* Imma name you Alex!

Alex: *Woof* <3

Thats it for Chapter one Bye!!!

Help!

Hi you reading this I am asking you for help (which I normally don't do)  Anyway... the reason i'm asking you for help is because I do not know what to do or how to make things funny so I need your help I need your opinion on a few things  1 how do i sound 2 should i be normal 3 do you think we are going to do good. Welp thats all thanks