I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Nice work Kya! I like how you added an illustration onto each of your slides. That gives us an example of what Quentin Blake's work looks like. I wonder, what could you add to your introduction to make it more engaging. I would like to see some more explanation of the task and checking for your capital letters!
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Nice work Kya! I like how you added an illustration onto each of your slides. That gives us an example of what Quentin Blake's work looks like. I wonder, what could you add to your introduction to make it more engaging. I would like to see some more explanation of the task and checking for your capital letters!
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